Crumble Beginnings
Aug 08, 2021
Creator
For the fourth time, Donnie is entering Middle School. Troubled, and wishing to better himself, he meets AJ, a new student, and his newly discovered next-door neighbor, whom he attempts to help with her own troubles.
Pinned by creator
This is pretty good so far! I like the art style and the Jerry segment. I also feel kinda bad for Donnie. He doesn't seem insane, just misguided; but AJ on the other hand... lol. Something I noticed, sometimes the text was a little blurry and tough to read when the font size was decreased to fit the bubbles—not terribly so, just a little bit for me personally. Other than that, keep up the good work!
Recommendation for you
Recommendation
Long Exposure
LGBTQ+ 2.3m likes
Recommendation
Vamp Sabbath
Mystery 380.5k likes
Recommendation
Heartstopper
LGBTQ+ 6.7m likes
Recommendation
Out of the Blue
Romance 2.4m likes
Recommendation
Strange and Wild
BL 513.9k likes
Recommendation
Humor me
Slice of life 2.8m likes
Feeling lucky
Random series you may like
1.1k views122 subscribers
Comments (37)
See all